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Builder Application ( my own creation not with a team of players)
« on: September 03, 2014, 10:54:13 am »
Dear Tene and 1cec0ld,


           The picture I posted before was something that I built with other people.
This picture is my OWN creation that you can search on the web for.


 Posting picture soon and please forgive me.
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Re: Builder Application ( my own creation not with a team of players)
« Reply #1 on: September 03, 2014, 04:30:57 pm »
This is the address for the SCREEN_SHOT http://imgur.com/a/QB8Gb
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Re: Builder Application ( my own creation not with a team of players)
« Reply #2 on: September 03, 2014, 04:37:18 pm »
Seems a bit or even a lot offscale to me, do you even know the scale the server uses?
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Re: Builder Application ( my own creation not with a team of players)
« Reply #3 on: September 03, 2014, 04:48:07 pm »
I'm sorry Commanduh. This is the real url with a better photo http://imgur.com/a/a0WQO


              And P.S. it has the correct scale. 10 blocks wide, etc.
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Re: Builder Application ( my own creation not with a team of players)
« Reply #4 on: September 03, 2014, 04:51:16 pm »
Sorry wrong link again. Wow. This is the REAL and REAL link: http://imgur.com/a/sBef5
At least I hope it is.
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Re: Builder Application ( my own creation not with a team of players)
« Reply #5 on: September 03, 2014, 07:48:27 pm »
Tene, this link is for you: http://imgur.com/a/pvnps
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Re: Builder Application ( my own creation not with a team of players)
« Reply #6 on: September 03, 2014, 07:53:01 pm »
Still off scale.

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Re: Builder Application ( my own creation not with a team of players)
« Reply #7 on: September 03, 2014, 11:01:29 pm »
Also the buildings are a bit off color and they also don't really comply with our building style.
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Re: Builder Application ( my own creation not with a team of players)
« Reply #8 on: September 03, 2014, 11:02:41 pm »
I say Denied and I'm sure 1ce would say the same.
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Re: Builder Application ( my own creation not with a team of players)
« Reply #9 on: September 04, 2014, 06:33:58 am »
I'm sorry Commanduh. This is the real url with a better photo http://imgur.com/a/a0WQO


              And P.S. it has the correct scale. 10 blocks wide, etc.

Every pokemon step is a 2by2 area in minecraft. Your windmills need to replicate that. The houses seem to have the door at the incorrect place.
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Re: Builder Application ( my own creation not with a team of players)
« Reply #10 on: September 04, 2014, 10:56:01 am »
Actually the houses are the same length like your houses. Second the lab is the same size. Third the scale is the same as yours. So if you critic me, our technically criticizing
your self. The color of the roofs of the houses is the same as yours. This is new bark town and you guys messed up on your player/spawn house too. If you look at the picture you guys didn't add the "bedroom' windows. You didn't ctiticize yourself? why me?


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Re: Builder Application ( my own creation not with a team of players)
« Reply #11 on: September 04, 2014, 12:21:11 pm »
The town was not built the same way as ours, I can tell because the front of the northeast house is the same depth as the front of Elm's Lab.
Also, we do critique ourselves, I've put NewBarkTown back onto the to-do list after our conversation about the roof colors and other details.

The need for Johto builders is not large enough to justify accepting this level of building at this time. I am declining this application. I do appreciate your help and contributions, but not as an independent builder.

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Re: Builder Application ( my own creation not with a team of players)
« Reply #12 on: September 04, 2014, 06:10:00 pm »
The houses seem to have the door at the incorrect place.
Actually the houses are the same length like your houses. Second the lab is the same size.
 
What correlation does the house length have to do with the door placement? Anyways, there aren't the need of builders like 1ce said.
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